Open your mind and see
Open your heart and feel
Worries are there to leave behind
As they’ll make your life bland
If the sun is not warm anymore
That’s because of the clouds in action to the core
Don’t get stopped by temporary things
That will make you stand with blinks
Don’t break that smile
Let it all flow like a Nile
Don’t confine yourself within four walls
As there’s a world outside flowing like a falls
Don’t get stuck with a thought and stand in blue
All that’s needed is a child in you
Who can think the unimaginable
And tries to make it possible
Many times, we confine ourselves to imaginary, illusive boundaries and restrict ourselves to envision things beyond the limits. We tend to forget that we can sculpt our life with affirmative thoughts and be a masterpiece of our own world. All that’s needed is to knock the things that come our way. It may open up to a new paradise in life!
41 comments:
Anand - poem? !!! is this the first one on this blog? i don't remember seeing or reading any before. correct me if i am wrong.
nicely written and so damn true that sometimes all that is needed is a child in us! loved that line :)
@Sujatha Sathya: Yes, this is the first poem in my blog :) Lot of people inspired me to write one and hence this post!
Am glad to see your comment... Thanks a ton!!! :)
I didnt know u write poems! keep it up Anand :)
wow ! what a great start. keep coming :)
love the essence of the words :)
@ashok: Thanks a lot ashok... Yes, I just tried my hands on it :)
Ahaaa. Someone is a magician with words as well.
Loved these lines
Don’t get stuck with a thought and stand in blue
All that’s needed is a child in you
Who can think the unimaginable
And tries to make it possible
@Inspector Saahab: Happy to see your comment Saahab. Thanks a ton for liking it :)
@Ashwini C N: Hehehee.. Just laid my hands on them Ash.. Not sure how it goes :)
Yes, don't waste the time by giving too much of importance to intricate matters and loose other great opportunities to discover!
Thanks a ton for your appreciation! :)
@Sahana Rao: Thanks a lot for liking it Sahana.. Am all smiles :D :D
And here we go...A wonderful wonderful poem...I love it. I think you know that already...
I loved the last stanza. You have opened the new paradise for your readers, literally:):):)
Yay!!! You did it! I knew you could and I'm so proud of you!
"Don’t break that smile
Let it all flow like a Nile
Don’t confine yourself within four walls
As there’s a world outside flowing like a falls"
WoW! That is absolutely gorgeous and so true! Very inspiring also!
I'm so excited, just like a little kid! He he! The closing paragraph after the poem is divine! Very poetic too ;) You just made my day, Anand! Keep that waterfall of words coming our way! :) ♥
Liked this poem very much and more so a maiden effort , I believe:)
You certainly have a vision for what the life is all about!
Beautiful lines.. I was happy to see a new post on your blog :P
You're one guy filled with positivity, I tell you :)
@Saru Singhal: Thanks a ton Saruu.. Your comment made me smile wide.. Was keeping my fingers crossed to see your reaction :D
@~*Princesa Fiona*~ Thank you veryyy much Fiona. Yes I did it.. Its all because of you, your comments and the way you brought out quotes from each of my post saying that it had a poetic imagery. :) Everything made me think about poems and pushed me to write one!
Even am so excited to see your comment. Thanks again!! :)
@Rahul Bhatia: Thank you very much Rahul-Ji.. Am so happy to read your comment. Yes, its my first attempt in my space. :)
@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫: Thanks a ton.. Very glad to know that you're happy seeing my new post here... Filled with positivity?? hahahaa thanks!! :) :)
Writing a poetry needs lot of imagination and some beautiful words to blend with it. And i think you have done it all with your intense lines of heart touching poetry. Its true we must not confine ourselves to the worries and things which would not let us enjoy the true beauty around us. We loose that beautiful smile because of our little worries which are just temporary like the clouds which cover the sun in the day time. Very beautiful poem with profound meaning in it and a beautiful message to follow with it.
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Wonderful rhyming post!
All we need is to preserve that inner child and all work and worries would be play!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Luv all ur write-ups incl this delish poem. Nowonder that U work for an Ad Agency. Catchy words well-describe the deeds which we dream of.
Good Start Anand. :)
The same feeling of not being contained in our imaginations and actions and positive attitude towards life which we get through your wonderful posts have been embedded in this poem.
All that's needed is a child in us is the most apt thing which you say...
Looking forward to some more poems here!
Good Luck :)
Beautifully written poem! And a very inspiring one too. :) Lovely words and a lovely picture to go with.
At least your posts manage to get me to think a little positively :P
Thank you for the comment. It's always a pleasure seeing your comments :D Looking forward to your next post :) and more of your poems :D
I keep my fingers crossed when I post a poem. There are many in my list. I am particularly scared of Prayukth's reaction...
The poem you wrote is beautiful...
Hi Anand,
So you are good at poetry too! Loved the ending rhymes! Wow you have crafted it beautifully man! And yes the lines are energetic and coherent with the optimistic thoughts in it! Loved it! Keep going! Expecting more verses from you:)
Regards Anand:)
This wonderful thought is applicable to all age groups.
Beautiful Poem. I am sharing this. :). Very well written buddy..
Very Inspiring
And soothing.. to the child in me:-)
Thanks Anand
Ya its very nice pome. I like this
@Elvirah: Am very happy to read that long comment! Thanks for connecting :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete: Thanks a lot Anshul.. Yes, preserve that inner child :)
MyKitchen Flavors-BonAppetit!: hahaha! Thank you very much Christy :)
@Kunal: Thanks for the wishes Kunal... Will push for more :)
@Raj: Thank you Raj!!
@♫♪♥PhilO♥♪♫: Am so happy to hear that... Its my pleasure too :)
@Saru Singhal: Thanks for dropping again Saru... Can't stop smiling at your compliment :)
@Nasnin Nasser: Thank you Nasnin... Your words are sure to push me for more verses :)
@Vetrimagal: Yes, thanks Vetrimagal... Welcome here!
@muktamanassu: Thank you very much for the compliment :)
@pygmalion: yeah, glad it was soothing to the child inside you.. Thanks Pygma :)
@Kavitha: Thank you Kavitha... Welcome here! :)
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